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31 October 2008 @ 11:37 pm
I'm going to CULL THE BUNNIES I really am. I don't mean to spam you guys but this story won't STFU. SORRY in advance for being an annoying TWAT. Where's my I'M BUNNIFIED icon? Make it stop.

People of the Sand
chapters: 1~Hunting 2 ~Brilliant 3~Footprints 4~Tight  5~Tag and Bag
by: ellymelly Rated: M
Fandom: Sanctuary
Category: action/adventure
Warnings: scary sand people, elements of horror.
Spoilers: Not really - but it's based on the webisode characters
Summary: There's something hunting in the tombs of Egypt, and Helen wants to bring it home.

People of the Sand at fanfiction.net OR People of the Sand at sanctuaryfiction.net
katie_9918: Anne Shirleykatie_9918 on October 31st, 2008 10:11 am (UTC)
You poor thing. All these bunnies running around in your head. Hehehehe.
ellymelly: making friendsellymelly on October 31st, 2008 10:18 am (UTC)
I'm writing a sequel to my Jack/Sarah/Alan fic atm in an attempt to quell the Sanctuary bunnies. It's working, sort of... lol. But for every 100 words I write of that, another chapter for Sanctuary pops into my head. It's NOT a good ratio LOL!

Anyway, i thought it was time i wrote the sequel to my only SJA fic :D How are you going?
katie_9918katie_9918 on October 31st, 2008 10:24 am (UTC)
You wrote a Jack/Sarah Jane/Alan fic and didn't tell me about it? Is that the one in the park?
ellymelly: crackship evolutionellymelly on October 31st, 2008 10:26 am (UTC)
yep, but now i'm halfway through a sequel :D LOL
katie_9918katie_9918 on October 31st, 2008 10:32 am (UTC)
That's great!

I'm a bit stuck on what happens after Alan gets Chrissie out of Sarah Jane's house, before Alan goes running that night. I'm actually thinking of having another couple of kisses, followed by Alan impulsively inviting Sarah Jane and Luke to Cornwall with them. But it's a working weekend for Sarah Jane and so she can't. Gives Alan more of a motivation to go find her.

But where is the sequel taking place? Are they hunting another alien? Hehehehe. Yay! I like surprise sequels!
ellymelly: are you gameellymelly on October 31st, 2008 10:36 am (UTC)
Here; I'll give you a snip. It's unedited and subject to change, but what they hey! :D LOL

The bits with * * are supposed to be in italics :D

Captain Jack Harkness made Alan twitch. He was just everywhere when in a room. He inhabited spaces to the extreme. Suffocated them. Most probably *aroused* them and Alan had had about enough.

“Just – just sit,” he stuttered, retrieving several of his items from Jack’s possession. “She’ll be down in a minute but in the mean time you just need to stop moving about.”

Jack raised his eyebrows as he was herded onto a couch a safe distance away from breakable items.

“She’s got you well trained,” Jack taunted, re-arranging the pillows to suit. “Come on, I hardly ever get to hang in real houses.”

“You’re not ‘hanging’ you’re waiting.” Alan could hear footsteps pattering over the ceiling. Sarah was on the second floor, borrowing a set of clothes. There’d been a little incident with an alien insect plague. Needless to say, they ate linen.

“Got tea?” Jack asked, unable to keep quiet for more than thirty seconds.

“Yes, but you can’t have any. We’re about to leave.”

“My, you are touchy,” he laughed, wondering if there was anything else he could to annoy his reluctant host.

“Sorry to keep you waiting,” Sarah Jane Smith breezed down the stairs in jeans and a man’s shirt far too big for her. Despite it all, she looked too cute for words. “You’re not allowed to speak,” she pointed in Jack’s direction before he could inhale and open his mouth. She turned her attention to the disgruntled Alan, “Neither are you.”

They both resigned to her superiority with a glare, and trailed her out the door.

Edited at 2008-10-31 01:39 pm (UTC)
katie_9918katie_9918 on October 31st, 2008 10:42 am (UTC)
poisoniv13poisoniv13 on October 31st, 2008 08:01 pm (UTC)
must! have! MORE!

Once again, impatiently awaiting the next chapter
ellymelly: beady eyes on youellymelly on October 31st, 2008 11:31 pm (UTC)
thank you for the comment!!!!!! :D I promise I'll write more soon! (well, I've already written more but I promise that I'll post it!)